by Cheyanne
wow I really loved this poem, it's great :) |
by David Toh
this poem is good = ) |
by Forever29
Excellent flow! Nicely written. I know where you are coming from, easy to relate with. Keep it up! |
by Seductive
i liked ur flow |
by Leanne
That is really good. I really like it. Look forward to readin more of ur stuff. |
by Kristen
wow..that gave me chillss..i know exactly how you're feeling..i like the concept of "other than you" and its a beautifully written poem..great job |
hunni, gr8 poem but u n i no u can do better than dave. keep smilin n ull get thru this. |
by MissKat
Hey I loved ur poem.. this is what happen to me just a while ago.. You are in my favorites now. Super. Loved your poem. +5 |
by Hayley
Hay Girl, |
by Choti
awww.. really sad.. made me cry.. 5/5. |
by steviee
This is a great poem keep up the awesum work.. i can relate to this alot cuz im going through the same thing right now! check out sum of my pomes if u get a chance |
by EEG
great poem....i can really relate |
by ~*Nicki*~
This is a really good poem. You should read some of my poems sometime. DOnt forget to vote and comment |
by Lexi
Aww, this is such a sweet poem!! You're a really good writer, keep up the good work! |
by marissa aguilar
gR3at lUv it kEeP ^ the gOoD wORk |
by Ari
Wow! That's soooo Good! I had somtehting simular happen to me. It's horrible. |
hey kid |
by obsessedgurl
i seriously started crying!!!!! |
by Kiki
Good job!Nice poem! |
Wow. I absolutely loved it. |