by »«¤ß詤»« May 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Actions have consequences |
Brilliant. You have very strong messages in your poems...showing them through personal experience is a great way to go. This poem holds so much truth, I definitely relate. Oh, and great rhyming. |
by BloodScars
hey this was really good 5/5 just hang on and keep writing |
by Brookeღ
I know it's hard to move on sometimes. It's hard to just put them in the past and never look back. Very well expressed! Take Care! Brooke~ |
Hey this is really good. I knoe exactly how u feel... i ahve been in the same situation befor. it hurts. but u will get threw. keep on writting ur great at it! Comment n rate mine to please |