by †Hidden Tears †May 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Daddy you keep coughing |
Wow that is really deep i like this it is amazing i like the last part : |
by Boycrazy
good job!keep up the good work!I know it is really hard to write poems.I tried before but mine never turn out any good. |
by Sonya
I REALLY LIKED THAT POEM AND IT REMINDS ME OF MY DAD! |
i loved that poem hun, i hope your dads ok, he's a great guy. see you at school hun |
That is so sad! It made me cry! He'll be in my prayers! 5.0 |