Wow, Amazing Job. I loved it, I really really did. However I do have some advice.

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There is one question though
Wandering in my mind
Is this love or lust
Hoping it’s not hard to find

The last line doesn't really flow, try this perhaps,

There is one question though
Wandering in my mind
Is this love or lust
Hoping the answers not hard to find

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I think I know the answer
Or at least I hope I do
It is love to me
How about you?

The third line doesn't really flow, try this maybe,

I think I know the answer
Or at least I hope I do
For me it is love
How about you?

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I know love is a strong word
But that is what I mean
Being held in you arms
Can make me say I have seen

Perhaps try doing this for the second line,

I know love is a strong word
But that is how I feel for you
Being held in you arms
Tells me that you are true

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You know the saying
You hands are supposed to fit
Well babe, it fits perfect
Bit by bit

The second line should be,

Your hands are supposed to fit

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I could go on all day
But I have nothing more to say
I hope that you do
See that I really and truly
Love you!

This last stanza doesn't really flow at all, perhaps try this,

I could go on all day
But I have nothing more to say
I hope that you can see
That I really really do
Love you truely

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Once again Amazing write. Looking forward to reading more of your excelent work.

Ciao, Joe

Greeat poem but just a bit long tho

Long but still worth the read well done...

TotallY nicE......

luzaN