Wow....this is amazingly written! So heartbreaking! I really loved the third stanza, it's perfection! Peace and love~Holly

Beautifully done, Heather. I'm so sorry. It's always worse when it's a child or young person. My heart truly goes out to the family and all the friends of that young girl. Bless your loving heart for writing this in her memory. Absolutely touched my heart. hugs, love,
*Ann*

it's cool to know that you care about this girl, even though it's your ex best friends sister. that just shows of what a great person you really are. great job. great poem. sorry to hear that it happened.

Excellently written, I must say. I'm sorry for the loss of such a precious thing. 5-5 for this one.

Eden

excellent poem, so sad to hear about her death. i know it's really tough, i wish everyone the best of wishes!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

beautiful sad poem, heather...i'm sorry for your friend, myprayer goes out to the family, and all the friend of the young girl....god bless you hun, your be safe,....much love & big hugs to ya girl...

love freedom,
clouds.~

Awww Heather, I am so sorry. My thoughts and prayers are with you and the young girl and her family. A beautiful write and dedication. Bless your heart.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

oh heather that was soo sad and im sorry abt the lose of ur ex-best friends sister ..... im sorry hunny if u need to talk abt it mail me ... take caree....
be stronge
peaceeee

Aww *hugs* Very beautifully written, Im so sorry hon. Hold strong ...
I love you babe
-xx-
Broken

I'm sorry about your loss she must have been a wonderful person.. . Keep writing and take care (always) xx: *hugs*

*> : PainOfOne

This was really good 5/5 but then again what poems of your aren't. keep it up!
love always,
Elissa

That makes me want to cry...5/5

Beautiful. That is very bad that happened.

wow this is a very sad poem but ireally liked it im sorry about the losss
take care
HS

Pretty good! I loved it!

Chris

Omg heather..that is so sad and I'm terribly sorry for the loss..I hate hearing about death..especially a child..I know your friend can get through this though..especially with you as her friend and by her side...that was wonderfully written! Amazing!
~Chelsey~

It's amazing when a poem can make me cry, so I definitely have to recognize the writter when that happens. Excellent job, and I will continue to be on the lookout for new poems of yours!
Luv always, KT

that's so sad...I'm so sorry. Great write though. <3333

Simply beautiful.
So sorry to hear about what happened, stay strong, and keep writing..

Failed

so beautiful and so sad, but another great poem heather.
you will always remain a favourite on this site to me! thank you for your kind words.
love sammi