I like this one. short sweet and to the point. this poem is really good! keep it up.

Much love ~ Jess

Hey! Awesome! I love it,it's short but you get the point!-C'ya P.s keep writing:P

this is my first comment to anyone. i've been reading alot of poams on line, and i wrote some too, this poem feels like me, i love it, do you have other poems on line?

I put this in my favorites, like this alot, keep writting