hey i really love ur poem ur a good poem writer i gave u a 5 on it u can read some of my poems if u like and i no what u mean in ur porm it happend to my mom but there back togther but diiviod after 23 years i have 7 brothers and sister now

wow it was awsome i loved this poem .... and i felt how hard it was for yaa but hey look for the bright side u hv a healthy and mature young man :)
grt poem
always smile
peaceeeeeee

yah my sister is in ur shoes accept that she still has her love by her side... she is very lucky to have a guy lyke him but who nos about the future. an u no wat just hold on an keep ur hopes high u will find that one true man that gods gives u he will come eventually stay strong ~*** mim gurl ***~

i loved ur flow, great 1!!!

that was a really pretty poem! i sort of feel how u felt! best wishes!!

nice job
i was moved
keep it up

Hey gurl I see wat u going through even though I don't have a child.I can feel the pain you're going through.Keep ya head up and don't let dat boy keep you from ya family.If he can't respect you, you need to tell him he betta leave you alone and find a anotha nigga you grew up wit and hang wit him and have faith in yourself and God himself.

i REALLY LOVED YOUR POEM. iT GOES TO SHOW THAT THAT STUFF REALLY HAPPENS TO GOOD PPL. UNFORTUNATELY THAT GUY WAS A JERK BUT LUCKiLY YOU HAVE A SON TO TEACH TO BE BETTER THAN THAT. LOVED YOUR POEM KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK:::x3LY:::

good poem my friend in the world right now

Hey there...i have just read your poem and i think its great! and i bet your a great mother too. You have a good talent so keep up the good hard work your putting in to the poems and looking after your son!

Lindsay x

Hey, that was such a great poem. If I was in the situation that you were in, I would of done the same thing. I'm 16 and not to long ago I became pregnant, but I lost it and it was really hard on me. So I hope that you and your son have all the luck in the world. Just keep up the good work and don't let any one bring you down.

WOW! That's really sad but I'm glad that you kept your son and your teaching him well. Obviously his father didn't really love you and you can do better. I hope to hear from you and tell your son i said "HI!"
LOVE ALWAYS,
xCRISTINx

wow this poem is madd good and u went trough a lot gurl. i just gotta give u props 4 bein strong and not lettin any thing put u down. cuz i am 13 and at this age manny of us r goin trough peer pressure and are forst to take actions like dat and i am proud dat u still did not care bout him and u did u and toke care of ur son

this poem was great i really liked it i felt like i was in your shoes i wish you and your son the best

awww...thats a wonderful poem and so heartfelt...i'm glad u dont take ur son's father's mistakes out on your son and you only teach him not to do as his father. keep ya head up.
much luv,
Renee

wow..that was really good...i cant believe that the guy just left....he's such a jerk...im guessing that you are in your 20s....it must have been really hard to raise a child all by your self...does your son know who his father is? you are probably a very strong woman because of that....so i just want to say that your poem was AWSOME. and it blew me away...

Such a great message for every heart to read. Beautifully done and I admire you for loving your son and never considering giving him up or abortion. This truly showed me you have a loving heart. I tip my hat to you, because raising a child requires so much and you did it. hugs, love, *Ann*

Hi your poem really touched some feelings inside me.It made me open my eyes that life is not as secure as my life has been.I understand what you have been through and I want to say that you must have a lot of courage to move on with your life.Peace to your future.Mercedes

wow that is one of the most touching and inspirational poems i've ever read!
~*lindz*~

i'm not sure what to say...i don't knwo what its like being a young parent and doing it alone...i couldn't do it. You are a very strong person who can really write poetry very well..