very beautiful! such great details and really well-written! post more, i'd love to read em! keep it up! 5/5

I love it.

Great poem! 5/5 for sure. It was long, but well worth the read. I can relate to a lot of it... Amazing job describing... Keep writing! You have such talent!

~BJ~

Awww, so sweet. I wish that would happen to me...love the poem

Wow!
this is an amazing poem!
love it:D so romantic and full of emotions!
:D
xoxox jules

This certainly was an epic it was pretty lengthy but had a consistent rhyme scheme and i loved how although it was a story the feelings protrayed were so much strong...good, very good

All the Best
Sondos