No release

by Jane   May 15, 2005


The pains and troubles,
of all these years,
being brought back to me,
releasing my fears.

This room so dark,
no light at all,
knowing if i move,
i will surely fall.

fall into,
the shadows beneath,
where once you've fallen,
theirs no release.

I need some help,
but i hide,
no one is here,
to guide.

This room is empty,
except for me,
a place i fear,
a place in me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    M speechless

  • 19 years ago

    by Jesse James

    I love the last line.
    JJx

  • 19 years ago

    by Avellana

    i can so relate to that, i read some of your poems. you've got some real talent. this one's my fave. lv A. x

  • 19 years ago

    by abcede

    wow! that is deep too!! you have a knack for deep poems!! keep it up! awesome job! 5/5
    love always,
    Abcede >,<

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