great poem, and you're right life isn't fair. but wat r u gonna do....it's useless to just mope around. take a step up. adn try and forget. don't focus on why life isn't fair. think about the things that make life good. like the friends u have now and the people still with and those who treat you right...and everything u still have and haven't lost.

Just think abt those things...life won't seem as bad

~Christina~

I knoe we're not tht close...but im here if u wanna talk

You're right I think everyone can relate to this. I know life isn't always fair and it really can suck sometimes! Very good work! Really enjoyed reading this! Take Care! Brooke~

so true, life isn't always fair, very well expressed. I loved the whole idea of the poem, you did a great job....And just like you said, alot of poeple can relate to this one and so can I!!! Keep up the good work!!!

Please comment on my poem Alone...

*Hugs Sabrina*

Yes I can relate to this. And a lot of other people can too. Great job. Keep it up.

Love,
Tiff

yeah i can relate to it. well done!

I think this would be a better poem if you took the time to look deeper into life and see the whole picture, But alas your still real young maybe you will see what I mean some day...