this is good....i love the twisted ending!

nice jod keep up the good work

you used fight and night too much I think, I bet if you think on it that you could use more colorful words. Good try though. If you get time please look over any of my poems I would be greatful...

this was an alright poem, though it got quite repeatitive... you rhymed the same words all the way thru, which made it a bit of a bore to read...

I think Adiction and Robert should shove it.. I liked the poem.. It was sad.. I lovers you Granny.. I'LL BE YOUR PROM DATE!!! lol *hugs* 5/5

~Jessica

Nice o9ne