great poem! i love it! really sad but i hope it works out! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

This poem reminds me of my friend and me.. It hits home and I can totally relate.. Very nicely done.. 5/5 none to less... Keep writing and take care (always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

thank you but there was no need to apoligize i will always be your friend

hey arelene its me im doing good dont destroy neworleans okay how you doin

use my email adress next time you want to talk to me or did you lose it if you did it is jessman5432@yahoo.com

not bad, its sweet but you should stick to one rhyming scheme
~Freak~

This is really good..and i definitely know what u mean, thanx for commenting on my poem, it meanz a lot to me...keep ur head up!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Gd

A really heartfelt poem, very nice piece.

Only thing was i thought the rhyming structure was a bit off, In some parts it was a,b,a,b then it jumped to a,a,b,b although it didnt really matter much to the poem.
Overall a very good read

Well done.
Gary.