EXCELLENT sweetie, very beautiful and amazing!!! I love it, especially the last part.....You wrote this so well, with such great feelings and emotions!!! Keep it up...

*LOve Sabrina*

lol funny word that... muddled. not muddled at all though, i think your definitely progressing as a true poet :)
-A

wonderful poem! i love it! but if a guys that great to someone i would date him! wonderful write! hope your ok, love is a tough thing.

~PLP~ lots of hugs and love~

I love this poem. I am sorry for your pain if this is true and about you. Thanks for commenting on my poem. I am looking foward to reading more of your poems. Keep up the great work!

amazing poem, i love it. 5/5 for sure!
take care and i hope to see more awesome stuff from you...
~Rae

Hey listen 2 Ari right now this is not muddled why would you call it that it's just fine!!! I hope no guy ever tore your heart up that badly. I know, it hurts really really bad that there are no words to describe it...oh by the way thanx 4 the 1st comment on "Just Friends". You're right, love doesn't sit around on its butt forever, and yeah I'm okay but it still kinda hurts. MUCH LUV TAKE CARE OF YOSELF

that waz really good...i loved it..
by the way..thanx for commenting on my poem..vicky

This is a really good poem. A lot of people in my family don't approve of my friends, but they don't realize that without them, I wouldnt make it through. Very good poem

srop saying its muddled lol cuz its not. its great. all of your stuff is great. this one especially. i dunno :P it "spoke" to me:P
~Freak~

i liked that alot! keep it up..u've got talent! 5/5

I liked it, different use of setting, well written, give it a chorus you could almost have a song. I can relate to it though. Love your work, look forward to reading more. xox