Memories {Draft}

by girlii797   May 16, 2005


Bitter-sweet memories are raging.
I want to be cheerful and happy,
Not depressed and tearful.
These memories just can’t be.

No one is here for me to share
All of my worries and fears.
No one really knows about
All of my shed tears.

These memories bring back a time
That was horrible in my eyes.

*this isn’t finished, and needs a lot of work, jw what everyone thought about it so far. *

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  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by Diego Moreno

    hye awesome poem..i love it....well is awesome now, and if u make it longer....it'll be super....take care girl...holaback girl...bye...

  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    wow that is nice, thanks nick.

  • 19 years ago

    by girlii797

    wow that is nice, thanks nick.

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    so i think it is awsome. it has so much potential in it. awsome work. its short but really good. remember your not alone. God is always by your side. and if you dont mind i would like to be by your side too. thank you so much for your comments. they really mean a lot to me. i really appreciate them. and yes i am very religous. I am very Catholic. and thank you for the words of wisdom. hope your ok? peace out God bless and keep the faith. Much Love

    Nick

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