so i think it is awsome. it has so much potential in it. awsome work. its short but really good. remember your not alone. God is always by your side. and if you dont mind i would like to be by your side too. thank you so much for your comments. they really mean a lot to me. i really appreciate them. and yes i am very religous. I am very Catholic. and thank you for the words of wisdom. hope your ok? peace out God bless and keep the faith. Much Love

Nick

wow that is nice, thanks nick.

wow that is nice, thanks nick.

hye awesome poem..i love it....well is awesome now, and if u make it longer....it'll be super....take care girl...holaback girl...bye...

thanks