Comments : SoLuTiOn=?

  • 19 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    so beautifully done, like all of your poetry! i really hope that you publish your work! i have one suggestion:
    "Somehow, all the answers,
    Are rolled into one.
    Another tragic love story,
    That I can not outrun."
    try putting can't instead of can not in the last line ther, it might make the flow a little better. it sort of stopped me for a second and i had to reread the line over. neway, this was a terrific poem! keep writing and stay safe, and healthy!
    kym (AntiSocial16)
    ps: i have to ask, the beginning, well, did u and your bf break up? i really hope not!