Thank You

by Nathan   May 16, 2005


The life I had,
While you were here,
You helped me through things,
That I had feared

Whether it was the flu,
Or a simple cold
It doesn't matter.
We're still bold.

Broken hearts,
Broken bones.
Even people,
who throw stones

You helped me get,
through all these things.
Even if it hurt,
even when it stings

I wanted to thank you,
I wish you would stay.
So I just sat here,
And wrote this today

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Hey ..
    good poem ..
    you commented on my poem a while back i guess i just wasnt into the whole "people interaction" thing but it can be fun i suppose! good job .. my names michelle hense my name thing and um just yeah HI! *waves* lol
    later dayz
    ==> chelle

  • 19 years ago

    by laura

    hey Nathan,
    i thought that was really awesome
    keep it up
    Laura

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    hey that was awesome keep it up when you get a chance read and comment on some of mine teen writer and he cant take me

    thanx

    huggs

  • 19 years ago

    by Alissa

    that was reallllly good I liked it a lot =) you have my vote! all your poems are great by the way!
    *lissa

  • 19 years ago

    by Nathan

    Thanks Cammy, just don't put the same comment twice. lol.