nice poem you should write more
love laura

Well im atheist generally so have no beliefs in heaven or hell etc, bu ti thought your poem was good and interesting!
Good work, take care, and keep writing!!!
Kt xx

GooD And InTeResTinG One!!! KeeP It Up!!!*thumbS Up*

Hey...ur poem is tight...hope to read more...
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wow this one gave me chills i lov it to death ur really good at writng don't stop!!!

i dont like this peom, saten isnt the holy one god is, god is the savior and creator of this earth... the world.... everything, people dont see how terible saten is how much he hurts u even though u pretend it doesnt hurt, i kno it does, saten is a killer, he is the only thing who causes pain, i say thing because he is a creature a hidious scary creature, who lives off our sin, he lives off of pl worshiping him, STOP go to the lord, do u think saten will help u, no he wont, he makes everything worse, and without him around there is no pain, no hatrid, no abuse, but all love from the lord, ask god into ur heart it is an amazing feeling
<3 maymay

I love this poem it gave me chills too