Ok, this was by far my favorite I have read by you so far. You have no idea how much I loved this but i'm going to try and show you. Each line was s powerful, from the very first line you had me gripped with your vivid word choice. The sadness and misery you portrayed were just some of the most beautifully sad emotions which you added nicely into this piece. To me it seemed so heartfelt and so capturing. I loved this alot and i'm glad I read it. Well done. Keep on writing. ~Mel

Great peice.....very well written with beautiful imagry and captivating wording! Awesome job! Love your poems! And this one was partciculary good! 5/5