this poem is really so great. I loved it.
and the choice of words is wonderful.
thanks for commenting on my poems.
much love, Marjan

This one is kind of a down from the other one. I still liked it, it's just not the same kind of like. You still did a good job though. Nice putting down cutting. Not many people do that. Good job. kilman = David B.

Wow that was really really good! you kept the idea in the title and that's what I like to see!! keep up the writing i really enjoyed this one!! my fav!! 5/5

interesting.. and sad!! :'(! i really hope this isn't true!lol.. good write! keep it up
abcede :P

Interesting
5/5
Ash