Beautiful! The only advice I have for you is to maybe take your poems a bit further. Also try and keep your lines more even and maybe even break the poem into stanzas! That's just my opinion! Keep posting! You have very good ideas! ~Brooke~

I agree with Brooke on this one. You could look into developing your poems into longer pieces of descriptive writing. This may add value to the words and allow you to explore more writing styles.

Keep Writing
Nici