Darkness

by Brooke Thompson   May 16, 2005


Darkness is now here,
He spreads his deep colored wings
Behind, the sun hides

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  • 18 years ago

    by johnnys_princess

    I liked it but thought it would been even better if you extended it still a short and sweet poem in itself

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I like the imagery here. I could close my eyes and have a great image of this. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Short yet powerfully done. I like the way you personified darkness..really brought it to life.

    [lost_laureate]

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    I liked the start of this one but it was too abrupt and short for my liking...left me wanting more...you should extend it...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 19 years ago

    by Nici

    Again this poem worked well, when considering it's overall length.

    Keep Writing
    Nici