hey i like this poem i gave it a 5/5, thats how i feel too. thanx for ur comment on my poem. talk to you l8ter
luv,
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Well now I am lost...
Having nowhere to run
When I have problems
Or when I am out of fun

These lines are beautifully worded and I like them all. The poem is full of grief and mournful feelings. Keep up the good work :)

We all have rough times in our lives and not everybody is going to like us, we just have to accept it and move on. Everybody gets down at times and feels alone, but I promise you hun you have way more to live for then you think. Excellent job very heartfelt and true 5/5 GG23