This is an amazing poem. Seriously I think it might be one of the best I have read so far. I'm speechless, it's so good. Keep writing because you definately have a lot of talent and are extremely good at it.

Woah hun <3. Nice write. People conscience effects them like a living person does. // Great stuff :P I like your poetry, you are deffinatley one for my favourites.

Love,
Kalah.

Thanx Elizabeth & Kalah! I appreciate it lots! Well, i guess i'm turnin n 4 2nite...PEACE 2 ALL OF Y'ALL AND G'NITE

wow...beautiful!!!! very dark... love it! keep it up!
Ariane
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that was awesome! love how you ended it! i give you credit. it's like having a battle with yourself, it's always intresting, i battle myself alot too, i kinda have a poem like this, "The Battle Within" they're kinda the same. hey have you noticed i am really close to have read all your poems! you're just so awesome and i'm hooked on your words lol. i can't explain how i love reading your comments! and the 9/11 poem ya i was sitting at home and i was like i feel like writing and for some odd reason the idea came to me, because what if that was your first day working there, ever, it's just so sad. i remember that day at school and home, how horrible it was just watching the news, and our teachers told us nothing about it. i didn't actually know what happend until i came home and i couldn't believe it when i watched the videos and stuff. well ne ways great poem! loved it!

~PLP~ lots of hugs and love from the bottom of my heart~

*opens case* langth doesn't matter missy! lol your poem is better than mine, any ways yours still has a 5.0 rating, last i knew mine doesn't! so by the power invested in my and my evidence this case is now closed and the verdict is this poem is better! *closes case*

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love from the bottom of my heart~