i like it:D

not bad for your first freestyle poem. not bad at all. i like how you clearly displayed your anger, while at the same time looked back at the past with a smile somewhat.
~Freak~

well if you ask me... your "free style" poems are actually pretty good. 5/5 sweets
love always,
paulette

That was an amazing poem. I loved the anger you displayed in this one. 5/5 Keep writing.

-Ice