by Amba
wow, that poem made me hold my wrist, like the way you say, playing a violin on ur wrist, and yeah, but it was very well put i think, that was a very good poem |
wow i loved your poem just by the first few lines because i know what your life is like becuase i have the same prob and i also write for escapism i hope that you get a chance to read my poems and comment my poems are teen writer and he cant take me enjoy |
by FaLlEnDreAm
WoW!!! I LovE yoUr PoeM Soo NicE!!! KEeP It Up*tHumbs Up* |
by Brookeღ
Wow that was amazing! Such a unique way of expressing feelings! Very well done! I loved it! Keep it up! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~ |
Amazing poem filled with hurt and emotion. Great job. |
by a bUi
that was a really depressing poem filled with emotion which i loved. your really talented and keep writing so i can keep reading. |
by Dorotea©
I admit that I don't usually enjoy poems that have to do with cutting, but this one was amazing! First of all the flow was very good and secondly the fact that you used violin instead of like "knife" is really unique and original. This poem was awesome, I enjoyed it a lot. |
by Tinkerbell
PILLOW!!!! |
Exclent....5!!! |
by ~*Ley*~
wow this was amazing and it was only 4.4 i really hate that. this truly was very well written and i love the whole concept of the violin being your wrist. yes this definetly deserves a 5/5 |
by No Motiv?
well, I'm not a fan of cutting poems....although I appreciate the metaphoric value in comparing cutting to playing a violin. You did a great job. Ingenious. |
by NoPatience
wow. this poem is completely amazing. i look for emotion in the poems and thats exactly what i got. you did an amazing job and keep up the good work. 5/5 huni |
by Sherry Lynn
Very sad, but yet also a good write. The part about the wall being painted blood red just flashed an imaged instantly that seemed to capture me. |
by otto
the reality of your word are graphic-in a good way, the way you place them are good-talented you are |
by otto
the reality of your word are graphic-in a good way, the way you place them are good-talented you are |
by Naima
amazing. I loved it! though I must say that this cutting busness is being abuse! Enough cutting or enough with cutting poems! How many times can u mutilate your body, your cute no really. I'm sure you could get help if you wanted it. sorry about the girl though. excellent job on the peom. too bad your way out in canada.. I would so date you but hey...I loved it!!! |
by ASPHYXIATED
great poem man!!! most poems are either about love or suicide you captured both in this it was fulll of emotion and the idea hasnt been used before(voilin=wrists pure brillent)...i voted a five on this mainly because it painted a picture showed what you live has been like....great work x) |
by paulina.♥
Amazing! This poem is one of your best! I could see someone "playing" their wrist with a razor. You are very creative! This poem was fantastic! 5/5 Keep writing! |
The emotional way you had with the words and the way you had that beautiful dark and sad tone made this a very unique and beautiful piece. I loved the entire thing. Great beginning, middle, and end. You are a very talented person. An awesome piece. Dude you rock! |
by Jamie
Its a Fuc-in amazing poem!I have read alot of poems about cutting but I have to say I have never had one make me think about it in that way.I have some poems about cutting if you have time Plz read and comment on them |