That was very unique, the way you used a different veiw of things to give an image that otherwise would have been 'ordinary'. some of it was a little hard to follow immediatly, so 4/5, great job!

WOW, I really liked this one, it had alot of meaning and It sonds/looks like it took you time to write it. Great job! Lots O' Love
BloodRedRose

Seems u need to cheer up as well :)

That settles it, you're going on my favourite's list. Damn you, I believe this is the first poem that nearly got me in tears. It's just so beautiful.

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I found one =D

But, wow. This is sad in a way. Really good though, I wish my first few poems were as good as this lol.

But I liked how you used he played the violin on his wrist, thats good imagination lol. Awesome poem!! 5/5

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