by Tainted Butterfly May 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You'll never know what made my hardened shell. |
by killix
this poem is very well written. i loved the way each line started with you'll never know and your rhyming scheme. please keep writing. take care. XoX |
by Amanda
Hey hun! This person is great just like the rest of your work. I think ur poem was written with thoughtfullness and it was very touching. Some people decide they have had enough and want to escape! Take care :) |
I guess there are lot more reasons to die than the one's you have said in this poem...Nice heart touching though...keep up the good work...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>> |
by Brookeღ
Exellent job! I know you never really know what the person is thinking! It's such a true poem. Very well done! It's so sad that people turn to suicide I have known a couple people who have done it and it's very heartbreaking. I don't think they really know how many people really care! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~ |
amazing and very touching, I can totally relate to this one.... You did a great job with this one and it deserves a 5, well written and such a great flow!!! Stay strong hun and keep you head up... |