omg, this poem is soooo good i rlly like it. and its rlly deep too and that makes it sooo gd. this is one of ur best i think. love ya laods xxxxxxxxxxxxx

omg, this poem is soooo good i rlly like it. and its rlly deep too and that makes it sooo gd. this is one of ur best i think. love ya laods xxxxxxxxxxxxx

that is a great poem, good job....i can definately relate...keep up the good work! I am looking forward to your new poems:)

Wow! Very very nice bbez, so so true. *hugs* Hold strong doll, I love you my little silly plum!
MWUAH!
xo

aww that is so nice, i can totally imagen everything your talking about
bit depressing the ending though but it's also true
well done 5/5

This poem is amazing! I cna relate to it a lot..Keep writing..Check out my new ones..xox

i realy love this poem, can totally relate to it, keep the good work up!!! thanks for the sweet comment bout my poem xxx

Yeah...so sad...everything is gonna end one day...but i certainly don't think so about the fights among man...they are so uncivilised...creating war with each other...X(

Oh, sorry for that, just reminds me of that...nice one by the way...