Wow i love it thanks for commenting my sucky poem.lol
Thanks
Morana

brilliant poem, the way you take the reader through the different phases in the girls thoughts is great, keep it up

take care always, lu -x-x-x-

Good poem, keep writting, 5/5.

Thanx for your comments

Lance

great again, i like it...keep it up...hollaback girl...

hey victoria, I love your poems.
I think they rock. and I loved this
one too. you seem really talented.
take care,
marjan