This is my first non-ryming poem. It's just my thoughts and how i feel right now. so please comment.
Love always,
Katie *aka sweetie*

OUCH "Like I swallowed glass and razors..." OUCH AGAIN. This is a great poem! OUCH. That single line makes me cringe...PERFECT!!! PEACE TO YOU!!

great poem!!! its sad.. but its a great.. not all poems have to rhyme.. if u look at mine.. mainly any of them doesnt rhyme.. keep up the good work..

Poems are not all about ryhming.. its about expressing ur thoughts.. i thought this poem is great.. really! Great job!