by Jacklyn May 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Dear daddy, |
by Lost Girl
That was beautiful and kind of chilling...it was really emotional...brilliant poem, stay strong |
Very creative! -- you're really growing with your poetry, Jacklyn! 5/5 |
by katie!
That was touching, very well done, I could hear a childs voice in my head, it made me think a lot, very emotioal and interesting poem, keep it up xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
Very sad hun. Extremely touching. I can imagine a little child going out and looking for their smile. You wrote this perfectly! |