Very sad hun. Extremely touching. I can imagine a little child going out and looking for their smile. You wrote this perfectly!

Luffvoo hun, <3
Kalah

That was touching, very well done, I could hear a childs voice in my head, it made me think a lot, very emotioal and interesting poem, keep it up xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Very creative! -- you're really growing with your poetry, Jacklyn! 5/5
keep it up

Love,
Heather.

That was beautiful and kind of chilling...it was really emotional...brilliant poem, stay strong
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