Tells a great story, i love the way this has been written
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Wow. I really took my time reading this poem. I really enjoyed reading it. You really do have a talent. 5/5 ^^

Again inspiring write, I love the way you wrote this, and the story it tells, but the flow seemed little bit off somewhere, i had to reread, a couple of stazas, before I understood what you were trying to write, I guess that could also just be me. But the word choice was great, and the vocab, was wonderful. Good job, and thanks for sharing. 4/5

Another amazing poem! But I like the other two poems better! I really like this line

Life so delicate it could be cut with in a blink of an eye < and yeah its true! Good story in the poem! well done!

Amazing :D It's an amazing poem, I think it had a great story, and it was very inspiring... I think the flow was a bit off, but I think it was still great :D

Lovely story-ish write!...written beautifully...Excellent choice of words...though the flow seemed a tad off..it did convey the story well...and the rhyme was perfect...which over all..gives u a well desrved 5/5!!
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