So sad! You have such a unique way with your words! You have a lot of talent! Take Care~! Brooke

Great I like it alot! Keep it up man!!so cool....Yeah this reads like a song...is it a song....hmm? Well..another amaizng poem. I love the fact that you've become dependent on her, just as much as I hate it. Cause I felt that way before... Like If I didn't have this guy life wouldn't be worth living......Great Job

"I would bleed her name,
straight from my heart.
Every drop of blood,
would add to my love."

Another excellent poem. This verse was my favorite. I just loved the way this poem was written. Another poem full of emotion and heartbreak. Keep writing and stay strong.

-Ice

I liked this one too....not as much as the last one but this one was very good also....nice job...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

I like this poem. It is very emotional and meaningful. I liked this part of your poem the most because I can relate to it so well
'I would drown myself,
with tears I cry.
Every drop I shed,
would add to my love.'