aww, so sad. Nice work.

Hi everyone this is my poem. This is a true story so plz read.

Chancie.

oh my gosh this is such a good poem!!! keep up the great work! i'm sorry your dad is dead, but writing poems is a great way to express your feelings. 5/5!

Wow, really good. Very powerful. Keep it up. 5/5 Thanks for the comment.

~no more

I'm sorry for your loss.. But it was written beautifuly.. Keep strong and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

OH WOW! You're great! Its so sad...I'm sorry if that's true! Thanx for the comment too! Keep up the great writing!

Luv Jen