that was really good. keep up the good work, you've got talent.

awww that was good but sad..hey don't feel that way...I dont kno u all 2 well but u seem like a great person and your a great writer..so dont think that way..But great poem..Keep your head up..<3 lindsey

Good poem. You have talent for the dark pieces.

Awesome poem harley I loved it. Keep it up!

Love always your friend,
Elissa

thanx for all your comments. they mean alot
harley

hey harley, it was a good poem but depressing, dont feel like that ur an amazing writer and just dont hurt urself. well keep up the awesome writing
<3 maymay