wow, such a strong, mixed feeling, and powerful poem! i hope things can work out for the better b/w u and joshua! sry it took so long to comment but ive been grounded. neway, this is really a great poem! i hope ur doing ok and i hope that through all the haze thats in ur life right now u can see a somewhat clear path in life. please try to stay safe, strong, and healthy!
luv
kym
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Thanks for your comment i like this poem allot..even tho it subject is nothing to like BUt it well done
and it Inspires me allot

thanKS..

I can tell it hurts.

I enjoy reading poems so I have read many poems from many different authors and I want to tell all of the authors who work I enjoyed reading that they are great writers and the should not give up on poetry and the should keep up the good work you are one of those authors I have enjoyed reading your poems thank you for putting them out there!!!