Hey great poem well done keep writin ur good!

One minor thing, you might want to change "was" in the last line...to "were" I liked the way this poem carried itself, I can feel a sort of subdued sadness while reading it, very well done.

that was a great poem, and very sad 2, if that happened 2 u im soooooo sry 4 that, i guess it happens at least once in everyones life, keep ur smile on cuz u'll find the right one 4 u out there somewhere, keep up the great work!!

great poem I loved the last line great touch. Thanks for the comments ill check out more of yours shortly.

aww sooo goood ! 5/5 keep up the good work.

much love
shannon

Great poem!! i loved it!!

Great poem!! i loved it!!

i think this one is your best poem!! u got 5/5 again!! keep it up!

this is a very good poem 5/5

Hey this was brill but a bit sad. So sorry about that if it's about you. Keep writing! :)

That was a really beautiful poem...It even made me feet slightly sad reading it! Keep up the good work!! :D
Ele xxx

wonderfully written, it was straight from your heart, you could hear your sadness....just remember that words said in our poems, are words that ARE spoken, they are spoken to everyone that reads them.....you are very talented, just wait on love, trust in God,and you will find the love of your life when the timing is right, just like the timing in a poem, it has to fit....and your lifetime mate will fit....keep it up 5/5 Love ya Becky

Full of feeling and well written, good job.

Keep Writing
Nici

Hey thanks for the comment:) ya that was a true story about my ex. Im waiting till the weekend,to see if he calls. you have a lot of talent and your still young. Keep it up, you can only get better.

omg thats so sad....dont worry to much tho, im sure theres alota ppl who no wut ur goin threw(probly not exatly but close) that u can talk to...great poem 5/5

aww good emotion. i really liked it.

amazingly written.. ive always thought that words of the heart are the deepest, most touching, and most honest words of all.. and u proved that in ur poem.. i loved the feeling u convoyed thru ur words.. i cud almost touch the sadness..
keep it up
nouna

Its really good, but sad.

I feel EXACTLY the same way, like you hit it dead on, good poem, i never good write how bluntly it felt

Oh..that was sad. I'm sorry that whoever this creep is, did this to you, but keep ur head up. there will be someone new....hey i wrote a poem called there will be someone new. maybe you should check it out. 5/5