OMG that was such a sad poem! Very good job! Just enough detail! Keep posting! Take Care! Brooke~

It was good and you put enotion into it. However, it seemed a little muddled up and I found it difficult to make sense of what you where saying. But good poem, keep writing.

hey this is a nice poem such emotion... keep writing such good poems and don't stop k? take care
-BrokenSmile