by tubabassking May 18, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Sorry its long but please read. |
by samantha
Aww Hunny, I'm so sorry u have a talent and don't stop writing!! |
Beautiful and it always made me cry! It had a great message but i agree you should split it up into Stanza's, it does make it easier to read5* |
This is an outstanding poem witha powerful message. please rate my latest post 'Zanthonie's Song' it is is the same topic great job5 |
by Emilia
great poem.. I voted a 5!! please check out my poem "A thousand tears for dad" please comment and vote! thanks a lot.. hugs |
by ~*Ley*~
not bad, not bad at all. keep up the good work. id check your spelling that cud improve it |