Cant you see me?

by † Hidden Tears †   May 18, 2005


I really really miss you
Mommy says your safe now
In a beautiful place called heaven
We had your favorite dinner tonight
I ate it all up
Even though I do not like carrots
I learned how to swim this summer
I can even open my eyes
While i am under water
Cant you see me?
I started kinder garden this year
I carry a picture of us
In my Blues Clues lunch box
You are the greatest daddy
I can swing on the swing by myself
Even though I miss you pushing me
Cant you see me?
I miss how you used to tickle me
Tickle my belly
My belly hurts
I try not to cry
Mommy says its OK
I know you do not like it when I cry
You never wanted me to be sad
I try Daddy but it hurts
Is it true you're not coming home?
Maybe someday
I can visit you in heaven, ok?
Its time for me to go bed now
I sleep with the light on
Just in case you come home
And kiss me good night
I love you so much
I miss you Daddy

*This is a song but i love it soooo much it made me cry and makes me think of my dad...i hope you like it as much as i do it was written about a little girl missing her dad that was killed in the 911...please vote and comment it would mean so much to me*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Left-Forever-No-More-Trying

    Heya hun, i cried jsut reading it and i thought the song was bad :'( man i love the song i was gonna put it on my poems but you;ve done it so i won't :)

    luv ya
    bye
    c ya at school
    x x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Someone special..

    Sam,

    Well done! Wow it was well good! Made me cry! 5.0 def!

    Luv yas

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Great poem! It was awesome! Loved it! 5.0 I guess that since i relate to it very well i like it so much!