hey that is really good, and if u ever need to talk email me at crzy4sayz@hormail.com im here to help, i can relate trust me

MALLARY

hey!!! thx 4 commenting on my poem and of course i remember you!!! this is sooo good!!!! i no you'll get thru the tough times....hopefully i will too. anyway i luved it! tell me when you post a new poem!!! lyl~lex

AWW,So loving the new poem,been waiting ages tho,i guess quality beats quantity!Very powerful,had me gripped,respect

this is a beautiful poem...I can relate to most of it. Nice work. <3

Wow...this was a great one too. Thank you for your comment. xxx

Hey, this is really good...i could definetely relate..wow..i hope ur alrite now if that was about you...very good at expressin how you felt...keep it up and take care...and btw..there are rainbowz after the rain, never give up.
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

wow..this is really good! 5/5 Great job!
Hope your ok!
*Becky*

Great!! thas all i can say
~HazE

omg i love that poem, you were right!! lol thanks for commenting me.... if u wanna talk sumtime u can IM me if yu have AIM its xalonexforgotenx

thankkss ur a doll

love ya leah

wow..this is really good, it describes me in alot of ways..
She would lock herself in the closet,
Her favorite place on earth.
As tears fall and land on her blade,
She gets ready for her rebirth.
well thats me..i hide in my closet... alot...lol..i know i know...anyways great poem!hugs-hayley

Your right i do like this poem!!!it is so good and oh so true... we all look at the one everyone admires and thinks she has no secrets but hidden sumwhere in her lies is a secret deeper then the ocean it's self. hey sounds like that start of a poem... well i gtg work on that thanks for the comment... u should read a raging fire... it is sad but it has its good parts. thanks a lot
Katie

this is by far your best one yet...the rhyming was much better, and the flow was smooth and didn't have all the bumps and stuff like that...absolutely beautiful! nice job!

very good! also can sorta relate to some of it.very good.keep your head up and hopes high! check out some of mine if u want, i have more on the way