Dude!.... Woh! I'm left speechless! It was a great write full of emotions. Your a very talented writer! ^_^

Hmm, another very interesting piece. You really have me thinking with both of these poems you have written. There were a lot of things that jumped out at me when I read your poem, and some of the lines hit me close to home. I have moved on from some of them, but others are still haunting me. Great write.

This is a very good peom.. Strong and wonderful... There's nothing more to say.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wonderful job, My favorite was the second stanza

I liked the imagery in this but I felt it was a little long for me. The rhyming was great but the flow got a bit stuck towards the end and the rhyming seemed a little forced.
All in all a good effort.