Comments : Someone

  • 19 years ago

    by PinkLaces

    Every time you see the sun
    Someone sees the rain
    Every time you feel great
    Someone feels pain

    I Liked That Bit, But All Of It Was Brilliant, I Liked It So Much, I Can't Stress Enough How Good Your Poem Was, All i Know Is That You Should Be So Proud!!!
    Well Done Again,

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