brilliant, keep up the great work! x x x

Wow, thats really good. 5/5! I love the comparisons!! Keep writing! Lotsa luv, Gem xx

hei Nobody-©, That was excellent.
Very good choice of words. Keep it up.
Wish you everlasting happiness,
Marjan

i love your words!! i cant believe i havent commented on this one. i miss you! where have you been?! write back! i have some new poems. i want you to critisize...i mean..look at. :D lol. well..yeah!
AMOR SIEMPRE!!
Nancy

Great Poem. I really liked it. I loved the rhyme scheme to it and you are right...somethings may seem hard to give up or you might somehow lose without them but taking a leap of faith could get you the victory too.
Keep up the good poems.
Jenn.

Having played a few chess games in my time ,,,,I really enjoyed this and a good move....Excellent write and good english.......

Very interesting. You read this and think of a game of chess, come to find the great moral you meant at the bottom. I love the morals at the bottom of your poem... Nicely done, as always. You're a very strong poet.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

Great poem. I don't think I am wrong when I say it's truly original! But I think you may have meant "worthy" instead of worth. I could be wrong. 5/5

I wonder about changing "he would" to "would he"... you inverted the syntax in the prededing stanza's last line, as well.. other than that .. that's a very poignant piece. solid all around besides what i stated earlier.

I loved that poem, good work.