god thats a sad poem!! I agree with jennie you should give her the poem see what she does...that was a great poem, keep it up, i'm sure she'd wanna change her mind if you gave her this poem, i know i would if i was her that'd prolly make me break otu in tears -.- have a great day!!!!
XOXO
Luv always
-Holly

Jeremiah.....that was truly wonderful! usuallu i tell a lot of people that their poems are good...but yours just pushes them in the dirt! that was so great! i luv'd it! if i had 2 give you something frm a 1, which is worst, to a 10, which is best.....i would definately give you a ~20~~ bye~

xoxox~amanda~xoxox

Thank you all very much. It's the greatest feeling to have someone understand where i am coming from when i write.. In this case being a few people. Thanks again for the comments and please feel free to stay up to date with my latest poems.

Wow, this was a really awesome poem. I've read through a couple of them, your really great at pulling out emotion.

omg....that was so touching...im almost in tears......5/5

I hear you man. I am currently going through the same thing. I only blame myself as well. I've made a lot of mistakes in my life, especially with my Ex. She'll never understand how much I truly love her. Still loving some one who is with another person is very hard to deal with. I know I'm still learning. Great poems man, you've definitely got a nack for writting. Best of luck with every thing man. You'll be in my prayers.

great poem i loved it hey um i was wondering can i put your poem fallen soilder on another website but i swear i will tell them its yours that poem is really good i want to share it with more people answer to it on a comment on one of my poems