My flower

by Amanda   May 19, 2005


I was looking at a pretty flower,
thinking of the stem all tilted,
it only had the shortest life,
now it's all dead and wilted,

The smell it gave was beautiful,
in the early morning sun,
it was amazing and standing tall,
when each day had just begun,

It's petals were shiny and very red,
I't floated about in the breeze,
the flower was making it's honey,
for all of the hungriest bees,

I thought I had to throw it away,
for it's job here was now done,
but when my back was turned,
It was alive, pointing to the sun.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

I really don't know why I wrote this
poem because i am a still drunk and writing about random things. Please comment though as I would really appreciate it. Thanks :)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    This poem to me explains how you show your hope through your life or it could be read like that it was very moving and very good...

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Well a unique poem! Another poem that came out good while you wrote it drunk! Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by JJ

    AWESOME Job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Enjoyed Amanda, well done. hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    =0S... I don't think that I understand this poem, it's very different from the others you write, but you are drunk so... ha ha...Nooo, I like it though!!! It's unique in it's own wierd way lol....Hope you don't get me wrong!!! Love you girl and I'm always here for you...'

    *BIG hug from me*