by Jessy May 19, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Whatever your dead/ You slept in our bed/ You said that you loved me/ And i let it get all to my head/ I loved you why did you do it/ I guess you can never tell/ because when you did my life fell/ through the light and into the darkness/ you showed me nothing and now my heart is for sell/ Whatever your dead and there is nothing i can do about it/ you left me how can i ever forget it/ you lie in a coffin decaying with your body/ will you ever come back/ Cause now love is what I lack/ I hate you for this/ no wait i love you please comeback/ until then i will never be on the right track/ But your not here/ And that was something i always have feared/but whatever/your dead/ will you ever come back |
I agree with James. Not bad though. It does have a lot of emotion...which leads me to think this is true? If it is I'm sorry..hope things turn out ok for you. :( <3333 |
by Wolfwood
an ok poem. It could have a little better rythem, but its got a lot of emotion. Rate some of mine sometime |