Love the first stanza more so than any but the whole poem was an amazing idea...Great job , 5/5

Love,
Heather.

great poem ..lots of emotion in only 12 lines

Your poems are always brilliant! Great job keep up the amazing work! Take Care! Brooke~

I really like this one great choice of words..5/5

I enjoyed this one alot, the word usage kept me interested and it all flowed well.
It was brillient, I love dark poems :D

well done x)

Very good work i really enjoyed your work keep writing and keep smiling and also yes you were right about my poem and thank you for the comment